Gut feeling knocking at my door! Scene 1

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Scene 1



Time: 11:16 PM

Place: Between the divided spaces near a door of stone.



Gut feeling arrives. 


She knocks and says, “it is me again.”


After looking at her Bluetooth speaker, Ankita talks to herself, “What if I turn the volume up? Will she leave my porch?”


The very next moment - kaboom!


The song screams,

 “I'll never run away,

From who knocking at my door

I never paid attention to whoever tells me no

I'll take your crown, take your town

Better stay ready, better stay ready”


2 mixed audible sounds overwhelm her already overwhelming piece of peace.


She witnesses Time killing a minute.


2 minutes later, the song ends.


The background something vanishes too.


And surprised, Ankita interrogates, “You still there?” 
















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